Monday, November 2, 2020

First Line: Pain


A strong opening line can make or break your story. Use the first line story prompt to write a short story (or the opening for a novel.)
As always:
Post your story in the comments of this thread.
Once you have posted your story read a few of your peers’ stories and provide feedback on their work.
Feedback:
Say what you liked about the story.
Say what needs to be improved about the story.
Be specific in your feedback.
No general comments like: It's good or this story needs improvement. Let the author know specifically what you liked or didn't like.

Make sure to include your Author Name and a link to your Author Page at the end of your post.
This is a clean site so NO EROTICA!

Start your story with the following opening line…
Every person in this world has experienced the most painful thing they will ever go through in their life up until this point.

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